Most editorial advice arrives weeks late, answering questions you no longer have. This sits in the corner of every screen and answers one specific question about your actual manuscript at the moment you have it — is this opening working, does this chapter earn its place.

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An editor in the corner of every screen, who has read your book

What it does, precisely

  • Answers questions about your manuscript — the actual prose, not a summary of it
  • Knows which book you are in, and asks which one if the answer is genuinely ambiguous
  • Quotes your own saved reports back at you: the proofread, the beta reads, the editorial feedback
  • Pins any answer straight into your Plan, so the useful ones are still there next week
  • Answers questions about how Your Book Pro itself works, without derailing into your manuscript
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Free opening chapter review — on your own pages

Paste or upload up to 5,000 words. You get back what the opening appears to promise, what is already working, where a reader may hesitate, and the three priorities worth fixing first. Free, private, no card.

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This is an AI-assisted snapshot, not a human edit. You decide what belongs in the next draft.

What it does

Ask anything: is this too slow, does the ending land, should this chapter go earlier, who is this for. It reads the manuscript in front of it and answers about that book — not about books in general, and not from your outline. If there isn't enough text to answer honestly, it says so rather than filling the gap.

It also never edits your book behind your back. Ask it to merge two chapters and it will offer the action and wait; the change goes through the normal versioned edit flow where you can see and undo it. An answer is never replaced by a button.

What this looks like in your genre

memoir. The memoir questions people most need answered are not craft questions in the abstract — they are is this chapter self-indulgent, have I explained too much, does the reader know why I am telling them this. Asked about your actual pages, at the moment you are worrying about them.

business. The recurring business-book question is whether a chapter earns its place, and it is exactly the question an author cannot answer about their own expertise. Ask it chapter by chapter as you draft, rather than discovering the answer from a developmental report six months later.

childrens. Children's writing raises quick, specific questions — is this vocabulary right for six-year-olds, is this too frightening, is the page turn in the right place — that are cheap to answer at the moment they arise and expensive to discover in a developmental report on a 900-word text.

fiction. The novelist's question is nearly always about a specific passage — does this opening work, is this reveal too early, have I set this up. Answered against your actual manuscript rather than against general advice about openings, which is what makes the answer usable.

graphic novel. Script questions in comics are specific and consequential, because an artist will draw whatever you write. Is this panel description drawable?

non fiction. Non-fiction questions are usually about evidence and order: is this enough to support the claim, does this belong here, am I assuming knowledge the reader does not have. Answered against your pages, which is the difference between advice and an answer.

poetry. Questions about a collection are usually about arrangement rather than individual poems: does this sequence work, is this the right opening, is the section doing anything. Asked with your poems in front of you and — importantly — with the line breaks left exactly as you set them.

script. Script questions are about scene function and time: is this scene doing anything, is the exposition invisible, is this act too long. Asked against your actual pages, with element types and margins preserved so nothing gets reflowed while you are asking.

textbook. Textbook questions are pedagogical: is this explanation clear to someone meeting it for the first time, is this sequence right, does this exercise test the objective. Asked chapter by chapter, which is how a textbook is written anyway.

travel. Travel writing raises a specific recurring question: is this description doing work or is it postcard prose? Along with the harder one — is the narrator someone the reader wants to travel with.

However you write

Ask about any book in your account, however it got there. An uploaded draft you wrote years ago is often the best use of it — you have lost your objectivity about that book entirely, and this has none to lose.

The mistake: saving your questions up

Authors batch their questions. You hit something uncertain in chapter four, make a note to ask someone eventually, and carry on writing around the uncertainty. By the time the editorial report arrives you have written nine more chapters on top of a decision you never actually made.

Almost all of the value in editorial advice is in when it arrives. A structural doubt answered at chapter four costs an afternoon. The same doubt answered at chapter thirteen costs a rewrite, and by then you are also emotionally committed to the version that is wrong. The reason a consultation is expensive is that it is scarce — and scarcity is the thing that makes it arrive too late.

What Your Book Pro does here

Your Book Pro is a writing studio for people making a real book. You bring the words — typed straight in, dictated if you'd rather talk, or uploaded from whatever you have already written elsewhere — and it does the work that normally costs thousands: structure, editorial feedback, proofreading, a cover, and a publisher-ready export.

One rule shapes all of it. Your words are stored as Exact Text and are never overwritten. Every suggestion arrives attached to a place in your manuscript, and nothing changes until you accept it. Where most AI tools quietly rewrite you into their own register, this one shows you the change and waits. Even the automatic clean-up pass is held to a length check — if it drifts too far from what you actually wrote, the edit is thrown away and you keep your own words. The editorial standards behind the feedback are our own, written for books and specific to your genre, not a general chatbot answering in a good mood.

Ask the Editor is the pill in the top right, available on every screen and included in Pro. It is distinct from the Editing Suite on the Edit tab, which is where the specialist tools actually run — Proofread, Beta Reader, Editorial Feedback, Fact Check, Source Check and the AI Footprint scan, each saving a report you can reopen. Ask the Editor is the conversation running alongside all of it, and it can quote those saved reports back to you.

An editor who has sold books in your genre carries market judgement no rubric holds — which imprint is buying this year, which agent to approach.

Where it stops

An editor who has actually sold books in your genre carries market judgement no rubric holds — what a particular imprint is buying this year, which agent to approach. That is worth paying for and this does not substitute for it.

What this replaces

What you are buyingTypical rangeNotes
Editorial consultation or manuscript surgery£40–£90 for an hourTypically sold by the hour. See /costs/ask-the-editor for the full breakdown and sources.

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